I pressed onward though, passing by one of the mounted candles ever so often. Something better than an oversharing receptionist.ĭespite the strange receptionist, overall this is a great little creepy story.The stairs felt like they would never end. But there would be better ways, perhaps he could hear something that triggered his curiosity. Now I understand that this is a plot device, they need a reason for the protagonist to look in the keyhole, which is something not a lot of people would naturally do. But if the reception staff made a point of telling me that this room is always locked, and no one ever can look inside or else then I’m going to be fighting with myself not to look inside. What was up with the reception staff in this hotel? I know that whenever I check into a hotel and see a non-numbered door, I assume cleaning supply cupboard and pay it no mind. My only issue with the story is the receptionist. It was an effective means of storytelling which delights me to see again. No one cared why stuff was happening only that creepy stuff was happening. I also love the retro feel to this story, the lack of story and context reminds me of the ‘ghost stories’ that would get told amongst children. This keeps the mystery element of the story alive despite you receiving a satisfying enough explanation. Was the red that was over the keyhole the ghost’s eyes? Did the nameless man suffer any consequences for his act of looking through the keyhole? Will the ghost haunt him now? Your left to infer allot, Is the ghost dangerous? She must be if no one can stay in the room. I like the fact that you have no clue what’s going on, you don’t know any real background information, only that there’s a ghost in the room and sometimes she looks through the keyhole. Mostly, however, I love the mystery of this story.
Obviously, the ghost is a supernatural creature, and the story itself is reminiscent of a jump scare, though one with a delayed pay off. This story has both mystery elements and supernatural elements which make it a successful horror story. The ghost is pure white save for her red eyes. The receptionist is annoyed but tells him that a man murdered his wife in the room and her ghost still haunts the room hence why it is blocked off. He goes down to talk to the receptionist and confesses to looking through the keyhole. He considers the possibility that his sneaky spying has been discovered and the keyhole covered. This time when he looks through the keyhole, he sees nothing but red as if the keyhole is covered. Our protagonist leaves after seeing this but goes back the next day.
Creepypasta the white door skin#
The woman’s skin is pure white, whiter than anything living, she stands with her back to the door, her head resting on the wall. He then looks in through the keyhole, there’s a cold wind through the keyhole and he can see that inside the room is a woman. He tries to go inside the forbidden room, but it is locked. The second night, however, he finds himself very curious. Our protagonist has no problem following these instructions, at least on the first night. No one is allowed inside or even allowed to look inside. Apparently, it is another room, one that is not numbered and is always locked. During check-in, he is told by the receptionist to ignore the door next to his room. The story opens with our nameless protagonist checking into an equally nameless hotel.
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